The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow. This was beautiful! By the second paragraph I had goosebumps! A very well-written tale of love between God and his children!
02/14/06
Such an encouraging piece of work! You came at just the right time! I loved the title, and I was touched by the journey, the love and I thank you! God Bless.
02/14/06
Wonderful use of symbolism! That's one of my favorite verses, and you definitely did a great job of capturing the details of emotion that come with being in that spiritual kind of place.
02/16/06
Wonderful, just like your last entry! I love the picture of our relationship with Jesus being a romance. Very good job. My entry in advanced was about Psalm 23 this week too!
02/16/06
This is the way allegory should be written! Excellent!
02/17/06
A beautifully told story. I loved the descriptions, very well done.
02/20/06
Beautiful allegory - I was drawn into the Scripture. ~Gwynn
03/02/06
Wow Dara! I love, love, love this! It's absolutely beautiful! It's just so Wow!