The Official Writing Challenge
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02/10/06
A very good study of the Word. There are a few pronoun issues, easily corrected. I like your good-natured examples toward the end--very pleasant reading.
Where are all the comments???? Come on people this was very well written - could be used as a devotional for a husband/wife book!!! Loved it, Shari! Except for the Mustang - I prefer a Corvette - '68, 4 speed, baby blue with chrome trim.
Great points, Shari! These are things that get lost these days...
Well done article on the relationship between husband and wife. Have you thought of submitting this article to Focus On The Family or a parenting magazine. Keep writing!
02/22/06
Very well-written article. It explained submission quite well, and the balance between the two. Nice job. (I drive a 95 Mustang, 5-speed, white, fast, extra horsepower additions.)