The Official Writing Challenge
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01/30/06
I loved the beginning, but then I got bogged down in the "preachy part" in the middle...and kinda lost interest. Instead of my earlier drive, I now coasted or slid to the Finish Line. However; That doesn't take away from the Great message this piece brings to mind, or the supurb writing. It's just my short attention span.
My fault, not the authors!
02/02/06
A nice piece - good job comparing His birth and no room, and today.
02/02/06
One of the better-written devotionals I've seen here.