The Official Writing Challenge
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01/25/06
I agree with the previous reviewer: some of your rhymes seem contrived or forced. This is a nice retelling of the Prodigal Son in his own words. Thanks for this poem!
01/29/06
Yes, there is so much that is wonderful in this retelling of the Prodigal Son. You've captured the kernel of this beloved story.