The Official Writing Challenge
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01/25/06
I agree with the previous reviewer: some of your rhymes seem contrived or forced. This is a nice retelling of the Prodigal Son in his own words. Thanks for this poem!
Yes, there is so much that is wonderful in this retelling of the Prodigal Son. You've captured the kernel of this beloved story.