The Official Writing Challenge
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01/09/06
Wow. Powerful. Thank you.

God bless,

Kevin
01/09/06
After discovering what was happening in the surprise Ending - I had to go back and re-read to appreciate the fullness of this story. Now I understand the Title, which, by the way is Brilliant! Well written!
01/09/06
Perfection--this is wonderful, wonderful writing.
01/12/06
One of the best titles, backed up with compact and powerful writing. Close to perfect, and one to learn from as well as enjoy. God bless.
01/12/06
Excellent...I loved how you described baptism. Nice take on the subject.:)
01/12/06
Hahaha! That was wonderful!! You sure got me. :-) That would make a great bulletin insert or take-home paper...