The Official Writing Challenge
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I enjoyed this. I'm not a poet so I appreciate those who are!
'Lily on the rise' recurs and unifies this lovely poem. What an effective and appealing image! I enjoyed reading this very much!
12/07/05
Very pretty.
Hello,
I really liked the image of the lily and could picture those first lily of the valleys coming up! Nice job. thanks