The Official Writing Challenge
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11/28/05
An intriguing opening paragraph! What would happen in the privacy of the gazebo? You kept me in suspense by putting in a few clues here and there. Excellent! You confused me a bit when you switched from Mrs. Lynch and her current issue of 'Star Fatale' to the response of Marta's followers. I like how Marta went from darkness to full sun (Son) in bother her writing and her gazebo and how her choice to write for God's glory was nicely confirmed in the end.
11/28/05
Very well written; I enjoyed every word.
11/29/05
Great story! The switching POV was a bit distracting in such a brief piece, but you still held my attention right through to the end. Great job!
What an enjoyable story! I had no problem with the changing POV for different scenes although in the second to last scene you might like to start with "Mrs Lynch" rather than "She" to make it immediately clear. Well done.
12/02/05
Yes, this was a thoroughly enjoyable read. So much truth in so few words. Thanks. Yeggy
12/03/05
Wow! This was unique! And creative! And very good! And don't wait so long to give clues! ;)
Very well done! Enjoyed this tremendously. God bless.