The Official Writing Challenge
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02/28/14
Very well said and well done. You've described the court room with intricate details, I felt as if I was sitting there myself.

Nice job.

God bless~
03/01/14
So did I! Also the way you left it open-ended made me pretty much walk right off the cliff lol! I was expecting more, so you had me captivated. :)
03/06/14
You did a great job of bringing the courtroom to life! Your details made me feel like I was there.

This line made me feel a little detached though: "That’s the reason he/she was in court now." He/she seems impersonal, but you did a great job of portraying the boy in the suit and the young man with his pants dragging.

Thank you for bringing this situation forward. It's so easy to ignore the plight of the troubled youth, but they are in desperate need of Christ's love.