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TITLE: Strong Women, Hear This Song | Previous Challenge Entry
By Ramona Cook
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Strong women
must learn boundaries,
for wicked Jezebel
still roams about
to find a house
in which she hopes to dwell.
Jez babies men,
she takes away their strength
by doing everything for them;
and with their yielded authority
she controls them;
DON’T YOU SEE?
She is not satisfied
only one to control,
she searches
with great diligence
for many many souls,
and if she can,
she will turn
your Godly purity
into a thing to spurn.
She uses anything to control,
anything at all;
she sees herself magnificent
and wise beyond all measure;
beware of her
she’s not your friend,
she’s out to steal your treasure.
So women of strength hear this song;
Strong Women Cannot Stand For Wrongs.
For Truth and Justice
they must fight,
live in the day, not in the night.
Roaming about even now
is wicked Jezebel
searching for the strength
of anyone that she may steal.
Don’t give her yours,
and bear in mind
that Truth and Humility will
vaporize her, EVERYTIME!
So dress yourself appropriately,
"put on the Apron of Truth
and wear the Cloak of Humility."
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Nicely done. Original and well done.
God bless~
I wasn't sure if you were speaking to women or men. The focus seemed to go from one to the other. I think it would have been better as a warning to men against the deceiving wiles of "Jezebels."
Good choice of words to emphasize your message.