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05/03/13
You've used beautiful imagery, lavish and sweet-smelling (and so reminiscent of the Savior's love). This reminds me of those beautiful words, "every tear I've cried, you hold in your hand -- and though my heart is torn, I will praise You.."
05/05/13
You did a very good job of describing your pain as well as how if feels to be held my the Savior.

I smelled the spices on His robe. Thanks for this entry.
This is beautiful. I could feel the intensity of the emotions you described and it drew me and in. Fantastic job.
I did not see who the author was when I first left my comment I must admit when I read it through the second time after seeing your name, I could feel the tears welling up in my eyes. I am glad that God is able to be there and comfort you tbrough your hard times. You created such a visual effect for me it was so intense. Beautiful