The Official Writing Challenge
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05/05/13
This poem is on topic and it has a great flow. I enjoyed your descriptive way of telling an all to familiar story.

Good job.
05/07/13
You expressed it so well in this poem of Jesus anguish between His human side and God's perfect plan of Salvation. Very well done.
Congratulations on placing 2nd in your level and 18 overall!