The Official Writing Challenge
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I think you make some valid points in this fascinating poem. You did a great job with the flow, the rhythm, and the rhymes, all while still telling your message. I think this will definitely make people stop and think and that is a good thing.
03/14/13
Altogether thought provoking, and powerful.

God bless~
03/17/13
A good telling piece in rhyme to hopefully get some to wake up and smell the sulfurous brimstone. Praise God for His word to alert us to what is truly transpiring (and about to). Good work.
Excellent. Excellent. Excellent. I find myself repeating, but this is soooo good!
Congratulations on ranking 6th in level two and 31 overall!