The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow! This is incredible. You handled a difficult subject with honesty and grace. I could feel my heart pound as I read. This is one of the better stories I have ever read.
03/14/13
wow- Really good story...I truly enjoyed this from start to finish.

God bless~
03/14/13
Thank you for your honesty and openness. You gave a heartfelt analysis of a very sad event and the on-going pain that followed. God comfort you....and thanks for sharing.
Very deep. You brought a perspective that I, as a man, would never know. How courageous for you to plumb the depths of emotion that day must have caused, and the continuing feelings, and share them. Thank you.
I was hoping I was wrong but as soon as you used the word scrape I was pretty sure you were going to be talking about an abortion experience. If this is a true story, my heart aches for you. My sister had an abortion and I still yearn to be able to me my nephew / niece and know I will one day in heaven. Praise God that there are no degrees of sin with Him. Sin is sin and He forgives it all 100%, if we but come to Him. He gives the freshest, most wonderful beginnings. His mercies truly are new every morning. May you walk in that newness if this pertains to you. God Bless. Your writing was very good.
03/19/13
This was so well done and so hard to read because of the subject matter. It made me hurt inside to read it. How heartbreaking. Thank you, I'm sure it was hard to write, but healing as well.
Absolutely heartbreaking . . .
Congratulations on ranking 33 overall!