The Official Writing Challenge
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02/28/13
Wow! This was some story! I know God can do anything, so it came as no surprise that the MC spoke in Spanish. This sounds authentic, did this actually happen? Anyhow, I really enjoyed it so much. Thank you.

God bless~
02/28/13
This story pulled me into the room as if I were there. The dialogue was great. Thanks for sharing your gift for writing.
The title perked my curiosity and the story flowed smoothly and was delightful to read. Well done.
Most enjoyable!

Loving you in through and because of Jesus, the Christ . . .

Have you "thrown a brick"?
WOW! With God all things are possible. You did a wonderful job telling the story. It flowed like water. Thank you and God bless.
Yikes! I was wondering how your story was going to end up on topic. Clever! And I hope you are feeling better. Keep writing.
Thank you for glorifying God with your true, honest, just, pure, lovely, good, virtuous and praiseworthy winning entry! God bless you.

Love and verbal hugs, Judi

KJV Revelation 14:12 "Here is the patience of the saints: here are they that keep the commandments of God, and the faith of Jesus."
Congratulations on your ribbon and for ranking 20th overall!
03/07/13
Great story telling! This kept my attention from the first use of the word "giggle." But after I finished, I thought that while the miracle was amazing, why would everyone's reaction be that it was funny? It seems someone, particularly her husband, would have just been in awe about the miracle. Just a thought... I'm just a beginner too. Blessings on your writing future!
03/07/13
Congrats! You a natural born story teller. Great work.
03/07/13
Congratulations on your second place win! This was an amazing story. Well done.
03/08/13
Congrats! God bless~