The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh how I love this! So well written, so thrilling . . .
Materfully done, beautifully written. I enjoyed it so much. God bless~
This is a lovely testimonial. I could feel your pain and desire to find d the answer to that empty spot deep within your soul. My one suggestion would be to go back and count how many times you used the word key. Sometimes I will challenge people to write on topic without using the topic word. If you read some stories in Masters, you will see that it can be done. Your story is definitely on topic. There have been many stories this week where Jesus is the key. You put a different spin on it by finding the key on the hill. I liked that and think it makes your story stand out from the others. Good job.
I'm so glad that key was made available to us. What a difference it makes in our lives now and for eternity. I really enjoyed the way you wrote this.