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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 2 – Intermediate)
Topic: Time (11/15/12)

TITLE: T.ime I.n M.y E.ternity
By Linda Gage
11/21/12


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T.ime I.n M.y E.ternity
You are here on a little dot of time;
I am eternity, a never ending line.

You are here with death, tears and pain;
With Me, those will never be again.

You are here, with your job, hobby and toys;
Follow me to a place of greater joy.

You are here, dwelling where everything passes away;
Come with Me, Iíve a new place for you to stay.

You are here on the dot, temporal as time;
Choose to move to My eternity; I am a line.

Live on the dot, working for an earthly piece of land ;
Live on the line with Godís peace, you canít comprehend.
Live on the dot in temporary love;
Live on the line, love unconditional from above.
Live on the dot in utter uncertainty;
Live on the line in Godís hope and surety.
Live on the dot, you may end up separated from ME;
Live on the line that leads to eternity.

Live on the line, itís free and can begin today;
Everyoneís admission has already been paid.
My Son gave His life for you to come to Me;
So, just say yes and enter My eternity.

Beauty and precious stones embellish an awesome city;
A gate of pearl will greet you into My eternity.

Streets of gold, a tree of life, what a sight to see;
Everything is new in My eternity.

No moon or sunshine, but donít worry;
My own light, shines in My eternity.

Nothing of shame, deceit or impurity,
Will ever enter My eternity.

With Me thereís heaven to gain;
Without ME thereís only horrific pain.
Take TIME today to choose the dot or the line;
Remember, in My eternity, I am yours and you are Mine.


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Christina Banks 11/23/12
I love the idea of the dot verses the line.
Shann Hall-LochmannVanBennekom 11/24/12
This is beautiful. You lay out the message with such precision and rhythm. The words flow off the page and the repetition really brings the message home.
CD Swanson 11/27/12
Interesting entry! I thought it clever while holding a prolific message.
Thanks. God Bless~