The Official Writing Challenge
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11/23/12
Powerful.
Wow this is an incredible bit of poetry. You really grabbed my heart and opened my eyes. This is beautiful and should be heard throughout the world.
11/24/12
This is short, intense and powerful. You certainly got your message over. Well done!
11/24/12
Wonderful message! Great rhyme and rhythm. Well done.
11/25/12
Beautiful rendition of what Christ endured for us. My favorite lines:

"Mourning the sorrow of your pain, My life to give; your life to gain."

Keep writing!
11/25/12
Intense- as I believe you intended. Good use of the topic too. Well done!
11/25/12
Extremely powerfully written, and such a clear message. Excellent work.
Intense and full of meaning that takes more than a simple casual read.
11/26/12
Excellent, passionate poem! It contains the ultimate message for mankind: "Bleeding hands held your salvation." Poignant, powerful.
11/27/12
Prolific, intense, powerful, and captivating. Amen!
Thanks. God bless~
11/29/12
CONGRATULATIONS on your "Highly Commended" for this lovely poem! WAY TO WRITE!! :)