The Official Writing Challenge
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This is like the third story in a row where I feel like God had the author pen it especially for me. Your words are just what I need at this exact moment as the day has been hard on my heart and self-esteem.

The only red ink I might mention is you repeated the word forgiveness and irritant quite often. Part of the repetition was a great point to help drive the message home but you may want to substitute forgiveness sometimes for absolution, mercy, respite, or even compassion.

But even that tiny bit of red ink did not distract me from your mission. You did a nice job of tackling the topic while delivering just the exact words I needed to read at this exact moment in time. I'm grateful God chose you as His obedient servant to deliver a message to my hurting heart. Your words mean more than you will ever know.