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This is a nice essay on world economics. You make some valid points.

Some suggestions would be to find a good proofreader to catch some of the errors like bankrupt instead of bankrupted and no-no instead of no, no. You may also want to have short paragraphs and double-space between them.

You definitely covered the topic with this piece. The economy is something that impacts almost everyone. I also enjoyed the Bible verses (make sure you include the translation) you used. They were perfect match for your message Good job.
06/14/12
Good piece on economics. Thank you.