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Topic: Fragrance (10/24/05)
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TITLE: IS THERE A GOD? | Previous Challenge Entry
By Marilyn Schnepp
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ADD TO MY FAVORITES
Watch the river as it drifts and flows,
Then look at the mountain,
majestic with snow...
Then tell me, My Friend,
That you "just don't know?"
Watch the sun
As it sinks in the west;
Then study the robin
As she builds her nest.
Gaze at the sky
When the stars are aglow...
Then tell me again
That you "STILL don't know?"
The Autumn leaves,
Have you seen their show?
After the storm
Have you looked for the bow?
Have you stood on a hill and smelled
the fragrance of the clover below?
Well, I have, My Friend,
AND That's why I KNOW!
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Good overall flow, and a quality effort.
blessings - dub
All in all, a sweet affirmation of faith.
It was fun. It was true.
And it made me SOOO happy to read!
By the way, if you visit the message board, and go to the hints page under the 'writing challenge' section, you'll see why lots of people know who writes what usually from 3-4 days before the results come out :-)
Thank you for commenting on my piece, A Precious Jewel.
Pauly
beautiful. cheers izzy