The Official Writing Challenge
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11/02/05
This has a very peaceful rhythm. Thank you.
11/02/05
Even free verse must have rhythm, all of the elements are here, with a little tweaking this will work well.
blessings - dub
11/02/05
I hope I would recognize the smell of goodness, although sometimes the pressures of life snuff them out. Thanks for reminding us all to be on the lookout for something wonderful:)
11/02/05
I agree with dub. I noticed at the end a little tweak--was the commas separating three words. Other than that good job! God bless ya, littlelight