The Official Writing Challenge
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10/24/05
Thanks for resisting sending her on the mission trip when her reservation was cancelled. I like your ending so much. There was something very honest about her standing in the rain and letting God wash her clean from everything. Felt a little haunting like not sure what she would do now but the ending felt like what needed to happen for her did.
Great progression of story and good dialogue. Very tight and well written.
God bless and keep writing.
Great story! Kept my interest throughout. :-)
10/27/05
Sometimes other things come into our lives and take up residence where God should be. But, ever so gently, He guides us back where we should have been all along:) Well-written article!
Agree with all the above comments. Well-written and I'm glad she didn't go on the missions trip. Keep writing.
10/27/05
That little nudge in our hearts is what we need sometimes to get us back on the right track. Good for Anna that she seemed to let the Lord deal with Lydia. That is a really nicely written story..good ending. God bless ya, littlelight
10/28/05
Good job on taking us for a ride of emotions from beginning to end. A really well written enjoyable read!
11/03/05
Witty title, Shari, and great content. I like the way you've brought her character out so beautifully. Well done!