The Official Writing Challenge
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08/04/11
powerful writing but i was a little confused as to why Paul "the boss" seemed to be electrocuting Henry. Maybe this was death row and a prison situation but it i was uncertain.... maybe it seemed unimportant given that it was the intense dialogue between the two characters that is the focus.

08/04/11
well done on getting into the editors choice...... honour indeed... I hope you have more comments as this is great writing
08/04/11
Second place...how sweet it is! Mega congratulations!
08/05/11
I too couldn't quite figure out the "boss" references, but found your story moving. Congratulations on your EC!