The Official Writing Challenge
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I really enjoyed how you got into the thief's mind. Nice dialog and very believable
03/14/11
I liked this a lot. It seems very realistic.

I would have developed the story a bit more... You had some extra words to play with. Perhaps take us back to him actually getting caught, or talk about more about his thoughts directly before and after he talked to Jesus.

I'd love to see a longer version of this. Good writing!