The Official Writing Challenge
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10/11/05
Great way to bring out the analogy. I thought your piece started out very nicely too - the questions grabbed my interest. Nice job. :)
10/11/05
My husband hasn't given me flowers for a long time! I liked the line about it being the thought behind them that matters.
10/12/05
This was a nice exposition on several mentions of flowers in Scripture. I especially liked the line "Jesus loved flowers." I've never thought of it that way before.

Your first paragraph seems to belong to a different piece, which I'd also enjoy reading!