The Official Writing Challenge
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01/21/11
I really enjoyed reading this! Good analogies. Pleasant read.
01/21/11
such a lovely piece of writing.I can see this with illustrations as a children's book that adults would enjoy to read too. you have a real gift
Wow this is super intense. I loved the analogy Simply beautiful. This is one of my favorites so far and poetry is not my favorite genre. Well Done!
01/26/11
This is a wonderful poem. I enjoyed reading it very much. Such beautiful word pictures. Thanks for sharing.
01/27/11
Congratulations Heather on your win. Your poem deserved the win. It is wonderful.
01/29/11
Congratulations, Heather. Great use of poetry to tell a beautiful story.