The Official Writing Challenge
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I loved this! I enjoyed the humor in the wording especially the last line. And yet, the truth came across quite clear.
I liked the easy rhyming style and sense of humor. Nice job.
Thank you for such an enjoyable poem. Good job and God bless.
This was done in a way I've never seen before and I enjoyed it immensely.
Although, a day at the beach threw me off kilter, just a little :)...I completely enjoyed your fresh approach with this poem and the light humor within.
This was cleverly written. I really liked it. The scripture was the perfect touch. Blessings, Ruth
L really like this poem. It has an easy flow and great rhyme. I enjoyed the humor you used in what was a so not funny situation. Good work.
I enjoyed reading this. Good job!
Congratulations for placing in the top 6 of your level.