The Official Writing Challenge
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Truly an inspiring poem. I enjoyed this from beginning to end. Thank you and God bless.
08/20/10
Very nicely done.
This is wonderful and quite true. often people get caught up in the little things in life. The poem flowed beautifully.
I enjoyed your poem. This line made me grin... And Jesus turned to him and said, “you’ve pondered this too long”.

Oh my, how many times do we get stuck in a train of thought that has no eternal value! Thanks.
08/26/10
Congratulations, Bryan, on your 3rd place. A very timely reminder of the power of God's Word - in any language.