The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh, how I love the old,old story of the Messiah-King who has thought of humanity (us)and gave His life for us, so that we might have eternal life.

Thank you for portraying Jesus, God the Son, in your wonderful poetry. God bless you in your writing.
05/20/10
I appreciate the richness of your vocabulary
Before I say anything about your writing GOD BLESS YOU. I loved how you showed Jesus'
earthly side so beautifully. What an inspiring story. Keep writing to the glory of God.
This beautifully reveals the depth of the author's heart and shines into the crevices of the readers heart as well.
This is so beautifully written and well thought out. Thank you for retelling the story of Jesus in a new and thought-provoking way.
He truly is our 'all in all'
Beautifully done!
I really like the many metaphors you used in this poem! Good job crafting a beautiful poem about all the "Writer Extraordinaire" does!