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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 2 – Intermediate)
Topic: The Critique/Review (for writers) (05/06/10)

TITLE: Well Dispersed
By Arnost Vevoda
05/10/10


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Dancing, romancing to be designated unto the Groom
Stately awaiting engagement (as the heir looms)
Treasures incorruptible, Divinely implanted,
Crop springing from fertile minds.

Yearning to share of its fruitful bounty,
Yields an open invitation for the world to dine.

Initially sprouting a meddlesome, surge of words.
Planned heritage staged - for paper display.
Page arranged, spun and crafted into play.

Some term as vapors - going places,
Though showing no traces.
Designated on course, to infinite empty spaces.
Embraces to truth - for all creeds, colors or races.

While sterile minds still slow to show signs.
To be dimly perceived - as through closed blinds,
Menially downloaded as loathsome exercise
Whilst enduring values - wantonly criticized.

Weaving with adverbs - fashioned to proper size.
In selective terms measured and treasured by the wise.
Together stacked and formally organized.
Cases lodged within the rampart of hollow secluded places.

We mustnít deny the rights of the inspired few.
For as the sage of this age sprung up
Caustic clouds of fallacies mushroomed.
As indented tin soldiers - wound up decoys.
Battered toys led into ambushed boys - entombed.

Now, more pressing matters alter my mind.
Not in certain signs, as awaiting
For the worlds to align.

Per say may we pray with certainty,
And graciously claim our two-step into eternity.


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Mildred Sheldon05/13/10
Thank you for this lovely poem. I enjoyed this very much.
Caitlyn Meissner05/14/10
I found this a little hard to read. Maybe because of your formatting? I was impressed by all your rhyming words, however. I never could have come up with this. Good job.
Colin Swann05/18/10
When I try to write poetry it's like an ABC Nursery Rhyme at the side to your deep complex poetry - couldn't write like this if I tried. Thanks very much for sharing your mysterious verses.
Troy Manning05/18/10
Nicely written. I appreciate writing that takes some effort to understand. :)