The Official Writing Challenge
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I love your twist for a manuscript. In a way our life is a manuscript. I enjoyed this very much. Thank you.
This was very well thought out and it showed as much as it provoked. I enjoyed this very much.
05/07/10
Wow, there's a lot here that could have been written about me!

This is well-done...I'd love to see who's written this. If you've not done fiction before for the Challenge, I'd love to see what you could do with it.
05/08/10
This is beautifully written, and such a lovely metaphor. I'm also quite curious as to who wrote this. Very nice.
05/09/10
I enjoyed reading this so much. It brought back memories. Very well put today and a pleasure to read.
Good writing!

One thing. Use two hyphens or better yet, an emdash — in places where you have put a single hyphen. A single hyphen is not correct and would not please Grammar Girl. :)

Love your title and message!