The Official Writing Challenge
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I love your twist for a manuscript. In a way our life is a manuscript. I enjoyed this very much. Thank you.
This was very well thought out and it showed as much as it provoked. I enjoyed this very much.
Wow, there's a lot here that could have been written about me!

This is well-done...I'd love to see who's written this. If you've not done fiction before for the Challenge, I'd love to see what you could do with it.
This is beautifully written, and such a lovely metaphor. I'm also quite curious as to who wrote this. Very nice.
I enjoyed reading this so much. It brought back memories. Very well put today and a pleasure to read.
Good writing!

One thing. Use two hyphens or better yet, an emdash — in places where you have put a single hyphen. A single hyphen is not correct and would not please Grammar Girl. :)

Love your title and message!