The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a very clever poem. It was fun to read. At first I questioned if it really fit the topic, but then I got the play on words of the insurance underwriter. It's definitely an unique POV!
It took awhile for my mind to wrap around this but I enjoyed this very much. Very, very clever way of handling the assignement. Keep writing.
A very clever poem - some great rhymes - and quite a lot of truth!
05/03/10
Oh, ouch! This is superbly crafted and really packs a punch!
05/05/10
Clever, but lacking mention of topic. Oh well, I guess it, in itself, could be called a "manuscript", right? (I was once an insurance underwriter myself, so this brought back memories). The rhythm was a bit rocky, poetic-wise and didn't flow smoothly throughout; however, Very creative. Good job and good luck!
05/05/10
Oops! My Mistake! I was thinkng "Manuscript" which was NEXT week's topic. Sorry...I apologize; Now, "Right On Target"...forgive my blunder.
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