The Official Writing Challenge
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09/13/05
Very good article with a very sound message. We must take that leap of faith.
09/13/05
Your very earnest writing will be more appealing to readers if you break down long paragraphs into shorter ones. Very heartfelt, thanks for sharing.
09/14/05
It's a great starter to get through to non-christians. Definately evangalistic. Um, a little overly confronting - but that's not a bad thing...
Starts off great but tends to ramble. Needs to be tightened up. Good message about the next wave, it challenged me.