The Official Writing Challenge
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Thank you for this fascinating story. I had to actually put on my thinking cap but once my mind started working I truly enjoyed your story. The title was perfect and the setting elegant. Keep writing.
Very interesting. You might want to break the first paragraph into 2 or 3 paragraphs to make it a little less daunting. I enjoyed your details. I could picture the ants and honey even though I've never heard of either. keep on writing!