The Official Writing Challenge
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08/22/05
"Charming Poem" I enjoyed every minute of it! "Lovely Writing"
08/23/05
Wonderful! Blessings, Rita
08/24/05
I loved this poem; it flowed nicely.
08/28/05
Excellent flow and excellent poem. One suggestion once it is established who you are talking about. It would be ok and probably a better read if you dropped the we