The Official Writing Challenge
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08/22/05
This story carrys humor, reality, forgiveness and love. Great job on combining all of these into a nice story!
I relate to this story very well. I always seem to travel overloaded. I have also found it is best to unload your possessions before moving house. A good message in your story.
08/22/05
Traveling lighter sure makes for a better trip in the natural and in the spiritual. Thanks for a fantastic story with all the right elements. Much love, Rita
I agree with all the other comments whole-heartedly, but I would like to add that I loved the honesty of this piece. Very nice, and God bless.