The Official Writing Challenge
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Loved the romance! In fact, I loved everything about your story! Great writing.
A western romance--love the happy ending I know will becoming for the MC!
I so enjoy reading your writing...I think the first paragraph set the tone for "Fall" to be carried through the entire story...good job!
I loved your story! Grabbed and kept my attention to the very end, and left a smile on my face. Would love to see it expanded into a book--so many possibilities!
I kept expecting something to happen to that bottle of rotgut. Oh well:) They do get married, right?
Some very pleasing understatement here. Likewise the humour wasn't forced but flowed smoothly. Not too sure about the relevance to Autumn, mind! You're writing well.
Great story. One of the best I have read this week. I just hope it had enough "fall" in it to get the points because you definitely have the gift of a good plot line.
Enjoyed this well written story. You brought the characters to life with thoughtful descriptions and dialogue.
Oh how I love westerns! Would you believe I have over 150 DVDs of western movies? Yours is my kind of entry. Are you interested in trading entries? Mine is titled "You're Gonna Lose So Why Bother?" **giggle** hehe