The Official Writing Challenge
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08/15/05
Good start. I think it could be expanded more to include more of the beautiful sights and how you felt about them. Best wishes with this piece.
08/15/05
Great ! wonderful humor!!
08/16/05
Humorous and fun to read. The punctuation is distracting, though; I think the piece would flow better without the ellipses (...)
08/16/05
What an interesting place to visit. Great humor and descriptions.
08/17/05
Very humorous.
Sounds like a wonderful place to be insane. Insane in Sane! I love it.
I also liked the play on the word insane. I enjoyed your piece the possibilities are endless