Previous Challenge Entry (Level 2 – Intermediate)
Topic: Sightseeing (08/08/05)
-
TITLE: *I REALLY TRIED, BUT I CAN'T THINK OF A GOOD TITLE FOR THIS | Previous Challenge Entry
By h o'hara
08/11/05 -
LEAVE COMMENT ON ARTICLE
SEND A PRIVATE COMMENT
ADD TO MY FAVORITES
for quite some time now.
Amazed at how different the second
journey around may be,
and startled
at the water
now swirling beneath me.
Not noticing this the first time,
but now there is no escaping.
This time around,
I call the shots
and walk on the water
I rain.
The directions now I hear are mine
as I beckon to wait for
what lay over this mountain
of flesh so weak, and spirit willing.
A mountain
I beg the good Lord moves,
and moves quickly.
For now, I am in my own way,
And can't see
You, the most beautiful thing
that I ever saw,
all of what pain
fell at my feet
all of what love created, and
all His blood had bought.
Oh, that you will see
When your sin swirls around you
don't allow yurself to
get in your own way,
pray for the mountain to move
and let go, let yourself
be born again
to take the second journey
through the water.
Now that you finally got here
an absolute beauty,
A sight for sore eyes,
(And a few other every things, truth be told)
With your new fingers and toes, tiny and ten…
I pray that you will pray to
The God who saves,
that has descended
which is what we have named you
little one...
Joshua Jordan
The opinions expressed by authors may not necessarily reflect the opinion of FaithWriters.com.
If you died today, are you absolutely certain that you would go to heaven? You can be right now. CLICK HERE
JOIN US at FaithWriters for Free. Grow as a Writer and Spread the Gospel.
Quite a good entry.