The Official Writing Challenge
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07/23/09
powerful reminder of how blessed we are, and of our responsibility to reach out to those less fortunate
07/24/09
The writing in this piece is fantastic. I was riveted throughout. Your talent is evident and I'm sure you'll be moving up a level soon.
07/26/09
thank you. A powerful peice and I particularly like your end note.
07/27/09
WOW! It's all I can comment!
Powerful story. Thanks for the prayer reminder.
07/27/09
Wow. Very, very powerful. And very well written as well.
07/28/09
WOW is right! This story is so gripping! And certainly not one that will leave your mind shortly after reading it! It will remain to haunt and convict and stir the soul on so many levels!!! Absolutely Excellent!!
Sad and powerful story. Well done.
07/29/09
Nicely done. Dateline has a good documentary that everyone should watch. It is called Lost Boys, or forgotten children - something like that. It is heart breaking to see their