The Official Writing Challenge
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Captivating! I enjoy reading your poem. I felt peace as if I'm walking in that quiet place myself.
08/09/05
A lovely melody!
08/10/05
Lovely.
08/11/05
Varied rhyme scheme. Thanks for posting.
08/11/05
Quite Beautiful.. Made me remember summers in the Ozark Hills as a child. Wonderfully worded. God bless you. ....JESUSPUPPY
Oh, how absolutely beautiful! This is a poem to keep nearby - it takes the reader to a lovely 'retreat' in the midst of life's challenges. Yes, I want to go there, too! God bless you for sharing this gift of tranquility!
08/25/05
I really enjoyed this. You may want to rethink the opening, it seems a little dark. Maybe: Beautiful trees with large leaves of green, the Shade felt soothing and created a pretty scene. Nice job, keep writing.