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Very nice story. Well done. Thanks for sharing! :)
08/10/05
Good telling story.
08/10/05
That was really sweet - my kind of retreat! Well told.
08/11/05
Good job, well constructed story.
A relaxing and enjoyable read.
08/12/05
What lovely memories.
08/12/05
This reminded me of the tress I'd love to climb - my havens. Thanks for a good read down memory lane!
08/12/05
Cute place described here. You could have left out the entire beginning, as you merely listed things most people know happen when one goes home on the school bus. Most times, the reader wants to experience something new.
Ah, I, too, loved the woods behind our house and loved to read. Brings back many memories... :-)
08/14/05
Nice experience that you helped the reader share. well done