The Official Writing Challenge
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04/09/09
Hi Norms, nice piece! I especially like the cat-dog interaction. Chloe sure gave you guys a good run for your money through the years. I love an animal with a strong personality. She will be missed. Have a wonderful Easter Love, Ken.
Sorry about your pet, but enjoyed the story and use of the topic.
04/10/09
Oh, how I love cats, despite their shenanigans!

A little bit of work on punctuation and dialogue would make this flow more smoothly.

Sweet story!
Entertaining story. Nicely done.