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07/19/05
Loved the way you gently flowed from a childhood memory into a lesson. Very nice one too!
07/20/05
Liked the way you went from experiences to lessons we learn in life. Nice article. God bless, littlelight
07/21/05
This is a great devotional. How many times do our lives act as illustrations to greater truths? May we learn with the small lessons.
07/21/05
Devotionals are difficult to do without being preachy and you pulled it off.
07/22/05
Serious lesson here without sounding as if you are giving a sermon. I liked your childhood camping experience and how you related it to the way many Christians behave.
07/22/05
I enjoyed this -reminded of the tent my sister and I made over the old swingset with sheet plastic :) Good comparison
07/22/05
I agree...this would be great as a devotional. you really did a fantastic job of capturing my interest and keeping it thoughout the article.
07/24/05
This is a great devotional. Thanks for posting.
Nice connection btw the two. I enjoyed your comparison. Well written.
07/25/05
A gentle, persuasive devotional. Bravo!