The Official Writing Challenge
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10/17/08
Have you been in my ornament box? We have an ornament that's more of a pink than red (and not because it's faded) with a manger scene carved out of it. I don't know where Daddy got it but he once hung it carefully and now so do I. I enjoyed this story. Well written.
Precious story. So glad this wife was open and responsive to her husband's feelings. You drew your characters clearly. Nice job. :)
10/22/08
Nicely written. Christmas all too often leads to family discord as one person's idea of perfection is another's definition of disaster! You turned the situation around instead to reconciliation.