The Official Writing Challenge
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09/05/08
Very powerful poem. Most of the world don't want to hear about absolute truth anymore. To stand for absolute truth in the eyes of many is to be labled judgemental and self-righteous.

We need to walk in love and compassion, but there is a time for tough love because eternity hangs in the balance. On any battery that has a positive, there is also a negative. This is just my thoughts. God bless and thanks for sharing this...Randy Gene
09/06/08
Excellent rhyming and words. I hope this places high. Very nicely done.
This is well-written poem with a powerful message. Thanks.
Nice rhythm and flow from one verse to the next; message was sustained. Nice job. :)