The Official Writing Challenge
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You have a good message tied to the discussion of bridges. I particularly enjoyed the poem.
The poem was very effective. :) I was a little confused by the "personalization" of the first paragraph, then the rest of the piece being like a documentary - ? Good devotional message. :)
Great way to share the gospel here. This is well-written.
It might be interesting to try the whole entry as a poem. The poetry at the end was definitely my favorite part. Thanks for writing.