The Official Writing Challenge
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Your descriptive words let the reader feel the sleep-heavy setting. Nice job. ")
Very well done! I did something similar a few challenges ago. You've done it much better than I did!
08/01/08
Great use of internal dialog and conflict. Very well done!
08/02/08
This was excellent!! I was not expecting the man to be Simon Peter. I love when writing does that! A creative and well-done entry!
08/04/08
Typically I don't care for Bible dramatizations, but this one was good. Well done!
08/06/08
Excellent from beginning to end.
08/07/08
Wonderful! And congratulations on second place. You deserve it. This was excellent, imaginative and spellbinding...Great writing...Helen