The Official Writing Challenge
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I love the creative way you described your sister through her beautiful jewelry. Very descriptive.
05/08/08
I would love to know more about Alex. She seems like a fascinating woman.

A few things will help to make your writing flow better for your readers: be sure to put a space after each comma and period, and hit "enter" at the end of each paragraph to create that nice white space.