The Official Writing Challenge
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Such a simple poem. Yet, in its simplicity, pure love and power are shown through His loving act for us. Jesus, the Way, the Truth and the Life. Beautifully done.
06/07/05
Nicely done. Very good rhythm & rhyme
06/08/05
Interesting the stantas are set, the measures in several were uneven, bu the poem flowed okay.
06/09/05
I like the poem and its repetition of "One Way" which is the only way for us to Christ. A lovely tune can turn it into an inspirational song or hymn.
The meaning of Easter is shared in a "simply beautiful" format in this poem! Simplicity is often the most effective form of expression, and you have expressed yourself so well!